Saturday, 8 November 2014

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My name is V. Vishal Bharadwaj and i write scripts which i send it to my family and friends. I have been writing since I was in fifth grade and now I am in ninth so I want people to look at my scripts and go through it, if you like it then you can inbox me the reviews and if you want any changes you can give me suggestions. But please do read them. 
    
                                                        THE Pirate life 
There were 4 pirates Jose , Joe, Jony and Jordan.These people are very dangerous,Cause they kidnapped the pakistan terrorists.Can you believe it and they also blasted the submarine of the USA cops which was under water this pirate groups 
name is J4.
    The special thing is they have guns.They also have a spy named Jackie.
       One day when the J 4 were travelling to Australia to get detonators guns and bullets as they dont have any  they got a message message from jackie that the R-team were attacking them.Meanwhile,R team were nearing them.The J 4 had nothing to do>then Jordan got down when the others were in a hurry to do something Jordan asked as he is new to J 4"who are the R team?" Joe answered "randy , raj ,rambo.These people are the police force who act as pirates,In fact disguise as pirates as they got the job of assassinating the world's most powerful pirates of the underworld team,we,the J 4". Jordan says"ok B....B......B.......but how can they find us ? How do they know, They......dont even have a GPRS ,How are the R team locatin'  us"Jony replies"is it any one tellin' them?" Jose says "only Jackie or our boss James Killer can locate . If JK tels the cops it will be a problem for him and us .So it should be jackie , cause he lives in Melbourne where randy and rambo live.Is he a spy for the R team too".
Jordan- may be.

                                 They get to new castle and got their arms.
   On their way back R team gets them . It is a blood shed fight  all the body guard die .The J 4 gets only injured except jordan.Raj says "Ha-ha R team Jordan and Jackie are Ours.The J 4 gets surrenders .STORY of jackie and jordan begins now.
                                                                  
         Jordan continued working for the R team.While jackie is working for JK .R team and Erruption his actual group is erruption.Erruption-tom,zero,king and dave.The pirate group who are on number 1 position.These people cheat others  a lot .Especially Zero and Jackie.One great thing is erruption knows that jackie works for R team and Jk but JK  and R team dont know that he works for erruption.
     One day jackie informed Jk that R team are findinf for Jk .He also informs R team where JK is.The r team found him. It was violentic deadly fight.But JK was killed.The erruption were celebrating .But in no time when the erruption were heading to greenland for celebrating Jackie recieved a call from R team asking him where the erruption is.Jackie said"W....W....Why?" Raj replies "to kill them" in an angry manner. Jackie tells everything to zero.Zero says"inform them".Jackie informs them.They will arrive in Nuuk,fight will last for a long time with 30 guns down and 22 bombs.Jackie dies,rambo kills him saying "jackie,,,we used you as our servant".Zero kills rambo.Raj kills King and dave.Tom was hiding in the go down.Tom comes out and pushes raj into the coal burning technology .Shoots randy and rambo.
                                     Tom stars a new pirate mafia with new people.Name-volcano
 pirates are the only criminals who can be be killed by pirates only.


This was my first story written during my fifth grade. 2010.

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